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About Me Member Self-proclaimed Genius crazimyke19/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 4 Years
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Prodigal Son

Wed May 28, 2008, 4:19 PM
Alright, suckaz, I'm back. For now... at least while I take my latest stab at a large piece of literature... I'm back deviating.

It's big... it's bold... it's full of (possibly too much) action. Even better, there are layers of depth to it that will be revealed as the story goes on and on.

It's called _The Great Dichotomy_, and I'll be periodically publishing it right here for the deviantART community (as well as anyone else who wants to read it). Feel free to comment/criticize/leave-arbitrary-posts whenever you'd like. Constructive criticism is particularly appreciated.

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  • Current Residence: Niles, IL USA
  • Interests: Martial Arts (first and foremost), Fiziks, Philosophy
  • Favourite movie: Dark Knight
  • Favourite band or musician: Uhhh
  • Favourite genre of music: Errrr
  • Favourite artist: Hmm?
  • Favourite poet or writer: Me? Read? Hah!
  • Favourite photographer: Eh?
  • Favourite style of art: Wazza?
  • Operating System: Vista *crys*
  • MP3 player of choice: I'm too busy thinking to bother listening to music.
  • Skin of choice: Angelina Jolie's
  • Favourite game: PRINCE OF PERSIA!! (probably the second)
  • Favourite gaming platform: Computer
  • Favourite cartoon character: Uncle Iroh ^^
  • Personal Quote: You can't fly on wings of gold. You need to rocket forward with a heart of fire.
  • Tools of the Trade: My Mind

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:iconda-phase-meister:
lmao - cheers for the watch! I made my webcam into a ytmnd, btw -

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:iconresidolancin:
Hi Mike! :hug:

I must thank you a lot
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"In My View"

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Hey myke, when can we expect the next installement?? really looking forward to it!

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:iconcrazimyke:
Heheh, my writing is schedule is... non-existant, unfortunately. I write when two conditions are met: 1) I have time and 2) I have the right mind set. It's not too common that these cross paths, but when they do, I crank out the chapters pretty easily. So... it could be a few days or it could be a month. Right now, I'm kind of occupied with fighting this BS here in America with network neutrality. But I promise to get it out asap.
:iconniteingale:
thanx for the fave ^^

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and with every breath...I am distanced from you.
my breath being hushed now, and my hands yet groping.
:iconcrazimyke:
I've been intending for a while to write about love (or my idea of it, anyway) since I see so many people talking about the pain it brings and so on (which I don't believe real love can ever bring), but your poem already expresses *precisely* what I believe. Thanks for saving me some work ;D
:iconniteingale:
actually...it's really ironic that you say this...only true love can bring pain, and it does. Trust me...the day after I wrote that poem I got really confused because my bf and my religion were clashing and I didn't want us to hurt even more later on so I said that maybe we should stop...he didn't really fight, he wanted what what would make me happy...I realised I'd made a mistake after about two hours of crying harder than ever before in my life, like somthing had died inside of me...I know it's hard to believe that there is pain in and amongst such bliss...but it is there. It always has been...always will be.
but...I call myself the luckiest girl in the world because I went back to my bf and somehow he gave me a second chance...so even though there is pain...true love will always find a way....I have to wait a couple days, but in due time I will write another poem...more complete than the one before about love.
thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and I hope in the future I can spit my soul out on paper in a more whole form.

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and with every breath...I am distanced from you.
my breath being hushed now, and my hands yet groping.
:iconcrazimyke:
Unfortunately, "pain" is too vague of a word. The pain I was talking about is like an angry, hating, spiteful kind of pain. (ie: someone talks about how they loved someone, their heart was broken, and now they hate the person) I don't consider that to be love. Certainly lost love would bring pain... if you're rich and you go bankrupt, you're not going to be financially secure any more... just as if you have love and it's ripped away, you're not going to be too happy.
:iconniteingale:
hmm I suppose I never thought of those kind of things as pain...ahh well, you live you learn...all that matters is that you get a chance to truly love

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and with every breath...I am distanced from you.
my breath being hushed now, and my hands yet groping.
:iconkagomehime:
i tagged u..hehe..check out my journal..

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